New Final Storyline

Following on from previous posts in which we discovered that our opening was too long and contained to much information we have had to change our opening and doing so our storyline. Our new storyline is:

Beginning - The audience is introduced to a young girl by the name of Rosie. It becomes apparent quite early on that Rosie is being held captive. The audience are immediately exposed to Rosie's type of living conditions in the cellar/warehouse and why she wants to so desperately leave. We see more of who Rosie is as the story progresses, a young innocent girl wanting to be reunited with her family.

Middle - As the story continues, Rosie is seen to be trying to plan an escape from her uncle and tormenter Nigel. Rosie begins to take risks and results to more desperate measures to escape this nightmare of hers. She is willing to put her own life on the line to do this and has come to realize that they may be no way out but she has to try and escape. Rosie's living conditions and lifestyle will get even worse as her torment continues therefore she has no chose put to take the appropriate actions relating to  what she believes is the right to do.


End - Rosie is seen taking her plan into action, she is faced with an explosive confrontation with her uncle Nigel this results in a climatic ending to the story as the audience witness her attempt at escaping which is successful.

The main character of our storyline however is a criminal investigator who is investigating Rosie's disappearance throughout and eventually aid's with her escape. However this investigator is not in our opening.

We believe that this is a great storyline to use as our opening fits in well within it. In doing so creating the effect that both we and our audience are looking for.